staring time

[rose]

standing staring
watch broken
shinning light
moon light
stars dance
entrance...
me,
take me there
to where?
to where i should see
blue sky
blue moment
serenity,
keep me lost
mind seems to me
consistency
of words and pictures
time nothing
time something
but to me
worthless,
all ending
all beginning
and yet no say...
life touching
my soul staring..
wondering where it should be.

~A~

[Hannibal]

OOOoooooooOOOOOoooooooOOOOOOohhhhhhhHHHHHhhhhhh... ... Me like. *nods* It was good. Simple, the lines were short, but they all kinda just moved, and at the end it all wrapped up a thought, that contains many thoughts, just as the way you wrote it. Well, that's what I get from it, and I dig what I got from it. Nice...